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UPDATE: good jump and my first run loop (ADVICE?)

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UPDATE: good jump and my first run loop (ADVICE?)

Postby starburst » Mon Nov 02, 2009 3:02 pm

hello every1 im new to droidz... somewhat new to pivot... not sure what rank i am yet.. but if you could tell me that would be greatly appreciated, I know I only have about 6 animations up but dont worry many more will be coming. no rude comments please. But some advice is always usefull. Enjoy the pivots.

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http://imageflock.com/img/1259372135.gif<-------- a run loop. i like this one *:D*

http://imageflock.com/img/1259372007.gif <---- VOLCOM PAWNCH!

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http://imageflock.com/img/1240723430.gif (pretty good =P)

http://imageflock.com/img/1240196305.gif (it's interesting but well eased.)

http://imageflock.com/img/1240152872.gif (owned by pink ball)
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Re: A cool loop (btw im new to droidz) Oo

Postby MainFrame » Mon Nov 02, 2009 3:06 pm

Well

the main problems are , easing and choppyness .

Do you know what easing is?

Easing is about acceleration and decelleration of movements, you know, if something moves, it doesn´t suddenly start, it builds speed up.

you spaced like that:

---------/------------/---------/-------/----/---/----------/
the / are the frames and the - are the pixles you moved.
ease like that:
/-/--/---/------/-------------/------/---/--/-/

you start with moving the object 1 pixel, then 2 , then 3 and then multiply it by 2 everytime.

the choppyness will be fixed with that.
also, put your FRAMERATE up to 20.

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Re: A cool loop (btw im new to droidz) Oo

Postby starburst » Mon Nov 02, 2009 3:08 pm

kk thanks for advice. I do know what easing is, however im not all that good at it...) =P
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Re: A cool loop (btw im new to droidz) Oo

Postby MainFrame » Mon Nov 02, 2009 3:43 pm

well, make some more animations then and visit my thread^^

maybe you should make something like a punch.
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Re: A cool loop (btw im new to droidz) Oo

Postby L I A M » Mon Nov 02, 2009 4:40 pm

I think for your level (low-med beg) it had pretty good physics, but it was a kind of pointless animation. Otherwise it was cool and fun to watch. Make a real anim with stick figures and stuff now.
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Re: A cool loop (btw im new to droidz) Oo

Postby starburst » Mon Nov 02, 2009 10:15 pm

I do have another animation.... and it does have stick figures and other things in it.. but w/e...
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Re: A cool loop (btw im new to droidz) Oo

Postby markecccc889 » Tue Nov 03, 2009 6:21 am

its ok but its choppy ease more and move every joint a bit in every frame
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Re: A cool loop (btw im new to droidz) Oo

Postby secretpivotpowers » Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:34 am

It's pretty good But you Have to move every joint every frame.
Do you know what a joint is?
k that's a no XD
Lol a joint is a red dot ok?
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Re: A cool loop (btw im new to droidz) Oo

Postby starburst » Tue Nov 03, 2009 4:10 pm

of course i know what a joint is?!?!? lol?!?!
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Re: finnaly a good animation!

Postby santajackson » Wed Nov 04, 2009 12:58 pm

nice animation like the top one but there is somthing rong when hes completely upside down maybe hes not moving enough id say med or high beg cant pick cos theres only two and there short but dude dont worry my anis are short too if you make more i can give you a more precise rank advice is work on easing and moving the joints more activly also sorry for the lateness of this message i couldnt return courtz cos my homework waz pilein up lol any way nice work keep it up love the camera moving thing iv never been able to pull that trick of. :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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Re: finnaly a good animation!

Postby starburst » Thu Nov 05, 2009 8:20 pm

UPDATE!!! ()MG
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Re: finnaly a good animation!

Postby L I A M » Fri Nov 06, 2009 8:47 am

I think that anim was pretty good. As always, you have great physics for a beginner, but it was just a little bit shaky. Now, make a fight scene! *:)*

Also, don't put your animations as an attatchment. Use the img button. Click it, put your anim in between the img tags.
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Re: finnaly a good animation!

Postby santajackson » Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:35 pm

nice i like the way the stick lands and bounces medish beg but work on the move ment of the joints especialy on the ball one i likes them all but that one when the dude lands on the platform his legs dont bend properly also are they put in the order you made em just asking
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Re: UPDATE: good jump and my first run loop (ADVICE?)

Postby starburst » Fri Nov 27, 2009 8:43 pm

UPDATE: good jump and my first run loop (ADVICE?)
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Re: UPDATE: good jump and my first run loop (ADVICE?)

Postby L I A M » Fri Nov 27, 2009 11:38 pm

That was really good. And I'm glad to see a beginner with not much stiffness. All that was wrong with that new one was foot placement, and definately shakiness. So, work on that. Look at some tutorials about smoothness aswell. It helps a lot. I looked at A LOT of them when I was about your rank.
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